My In-camera editing

In-camera editing is a really useful technique that can only be used while on camera and filming shots. It is where instead of editing all the shots that you have filmed, you can edit it in camera.

In my clip that I made up above, was supposed to be an example of what in-camera editing is. But the problem is, is that when the second shot started as the person was walking out the door, it didn't look as it would look like at the end of the first shot.